The College Essay Is Everything That’s Wrong With America
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Gonna hard disagree that the purpose is useless, the problem is the advice we give kids. I work at a scholarship competition that has an essay requirement. We're p vague with what we ask for in the essay, the prompt just asks student's to share a meaningful story about themselves or someone who has inspired them. Thousands of kids every year write in with their "oh woe is me, I faced such adversity" essays, and pretty much all of them get ignored because they all look the same. I'm still young enough to remember high school, so I know that they're getting coached to write this drivel, because I remember getting coached the same way.
The kids who end up receiving scholarships are always the ones who use the essay for it's actual purpose; to give us an insight into who they are. Usually they write about something they're passionate about, like the research they're doing. Some students write a beautiful work of metaphorical prose. Once, we received a poem, and I wish we got more like those. These students ended up having far more unique and interesting essays, essays that ended up earning them scholarships, and they completely broke the "rules" of a good essay.
It seems that what the author of this article really has a problem with is the image that American high schools teach of what a "good college essay" ought to be, rather than the essay's purpose as a tool that ultimately allows students an opportunity to define themselves outside of the standardized methods of measuring intelligence we employ. I agree that it's an issue and schools should probably focus more on telling kids to highlight what they've done rather than lament their circumstances, but it's also not even in the top 25 greatest issues with American high schools.