Dad Jokes @lemmy.world ColeSloth @discuss.tchncs.de 2mo ago I sent ten different puns into a pun contest in hopes of having a winner. But no pun in ten did.
I got the joke, in fact I knew the joke. The problem here is that nowhere does it set up the "no pun did WIN".
If we want to be pedantic, the setup would have ended with "... hoping to win"Then we have "no pun in ten did [win]".But really, it's fine. Bravo.
Mate, I'm saying this in the nicest way I can: You need to rephrase this because no pun did what?
No pun in ten did.
Not one pun, of those ten puns did win
“No pun intended”
I got the joke, in fact I knew the joke. The problem here is that nowhere does it set up the "no pun did WIN".
If we want to be pedantic, the setup would have ended with "... hoping to win"
Then we have "no pun in ten did [win]".
But really, it's fine. Bravo.